Letter [Updated 20th November]
Subject: Self Introduction Dear Mr Brad, I am Chia Kai Fong, currently a Year 1 student at Singapore Institute of Technology studying Mechanical Engineering. I chose to study engineering as since young, I have always been fascinated by how things work. Like how planes fly? And how does a robot move? This interest in engineering led me to actively engage in robotics as a co-curricular activity during both my primary and secondary school years. After completing secondary school, I furthered my education by studying biomedical engineering at Temasek Polytechnic, where I also obtained certification in basic 3D printing. Additionally, I am currently serving as a grassroots leader at Nee Soon East Youth Network. I am currently holding the role of head of publicity within my youth network. A strong communication skill that I have attained through volunteering would be digital communication. As head of publicity, I designed multiple digital content like digital display panels posters, and ban
Hi KaiFong, great examples in your pitch, especially what you said about you being a grassroot leader. I feel that you could use with alittle more enthusiasm and speak with more confidence.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Kai Fong, for your effort. As Justin has mentioned, you probably should be more animated in terms of your delivery.
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